Ultimate Corp webiste
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| Cmdr Raptor |
 Jun 22 2004, 10:38 PM
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Evil Corporate CEO  Group: Life Posts: 234 Joined: Feb 2003 From: Norway Member No.: 46  |
I've made a new one. Cleaner and more informative.
And hopefully it will be updated more often too. :) http://web.hibo.no/~werner/ultimatecorp |
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| Chico |
Jun 23 2004, 01:03 PM
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Mad Auction Bloke Group: Life Posts: 102 Joined: Apr 2003 From: Watford UK Member No.: 72 |
It also insults me on there, so theres something for everybody :P
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| Game Keeper |
Jun 24 2004, 12:27 AM
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Young Adolescent Group: Life Posts: 105 Joined: Nov 2003 Member No.: 241 |
On your site "But with a rooster that's almost never full" is your subconcious talking about your life, or did you mean "But with a roster that's almost never full"
Also, it's "truly" not "truely" |
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| NoWearMan |
Jun 24 2004, 01:53 AM
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Nearing Adolescence Group: Life Posts: 84 Joined: Jul 2003 Member No.: 135 |
GRAMMAR LAWYERS ARE SO COOL
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| jonoboiiy |
Jun 24 2004, 06:11 PM
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Popstar Group: Life Posts: 89 Joined: Jan 2003 Member No.: 25 |
QUOTE(Game Keeper @ Jun 24 2004, 12:27 AM) On your site "But with a rooster that's almost never full" is your subconcious talking about your life, or did you mean "But with a roster that's almost never full" Also, it's "truly" not "truely" If we are getting technical, there should have been a question mark after that first sentence. Secondly, the entire structure of the first sentence is completely out of whack. Without commas before and after the "rooster" quotation, the reader is forced to reread the sentence over, trying to find the pauses that would allow the thought process to flow in a coherent manner. As it stands, that line of syntax is a complete disaster. Furthermore, the last sentence of your post is lacking a period at the end of it. While it does make use of an effective comma, the line fails regardless as it leaves the reader wondering whether the sentence is complete or not. A simple period at the end would have solved that problem. (It is also required out of necessity to end sentences with some form of punctuation. Preferably it would be the correct, corresponding punctionation. That may be shocking, but it is true.) :P :P :P This post has been edited by jonoboiiy: Jun 24 2004, 11:15 PM |
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| Doom Marine |
Jun 24 2004, 08:10 PM
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Young Adolescent Group: Life Posts: 114 Joined: Jun 2003 From: Australia Member No.: 126 |
ahh jono you gave me a good laugh there
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| Cmdr Raptor |
Jun 24 2004, 08:36 PM
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Evil Corporate CEO Group: Life Posts: 234 Joined: Feb 2003 From: Norway Member No.: 46 |
GK, joke or not, english is not my mother tongue. So until you can write/talk/read norwegian at the same level I can english, I will -maybe- listen to you. Until then, så kan du holde kjeften din.
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| Chico |
Jun 24 2004, 10:04 PM
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Mad Auction Bloke Group: Life Posts: 102 Joined: Apr 2003 From: Watford UK Member No.: 72 |
QUOTE(Cmdr Raptor @ Jun 24 2004, 09:36 PM) så kan du holde kjeften din. Ohh that was harse.. leave GK's cross dressing out of this :P |
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